Give me feedback on my first track!

[StevenAbraham 22]

Hey guys, just made a short track for fun, but before I show some of my friends IRL i'd like some feedback. Everything is appreciated! 

[StevenAbraham 22]

Bump? Please guys, takes 2 minutes to listen and give an opinion and will help me out a bunch. Plus the song is embedded so you don't even have to click a link.

[StevenAbraham 22]

thanks for the feedback guys, means a lot

[Arix 59]

I just noticed this. For being your first track it's pretty good everything should be mixed off a little better and if you are using FL studio, automation clips all the way! Good job

[StevenAbraham 22]

I just noticed this. For being your first track it's pretty good everything should be mixed off a little better and if you are using FL studio, automation clips all the way! Good job

Thanks for realz! Yup i'm using fl studio and still trying to get the hang of automation clips, but ill be sure to try to do some more complex mixing and clips in my next one.

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